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my voice is the crow
that caws in the pale night
right beside your bedroom door

(I am sorry
 I am not
 who you thought I was
 who you want me to be)

and I come in
uninvited, landing
on the frame of your abdomen

I want to die
by your arrow, I
say.

if you do not love me
then who will?
forgive meee
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:iconamanda-graham:
Amanda-Graham Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Professional Writer
featured here Kait - [link]
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:iconkaitforest:
KaitForest Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012   Writer
thank you!
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:iconani-ko:
Ani-ko Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
beautiful....
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:iconkaitforest:
KaitForest Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012   Writer
thank you <3
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:iconhazeltown:
hazeltown Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer

(I am sorry
I am not
who you thought I was
who you want me to be)


brave.
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:iconkaitforest:
KaitForest Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012   Writer
love
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:iconthephantasmknight:
ThePhantasmKnight Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
-forgives- Now pray my child.
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:iconkaitforest:
KaitForest Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012   Writer
:pray:
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:iconthephantasmknight:
ThePhantasmKnight Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
Good girl, now here's your complimentary seventeen bottles of wine for sacrament...it's seventeen right? Ah who cares, I'm a church, I have plenty of wine!
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touristEYES Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
'I want to die
by your arrow, I
say.'

<3

i love this, reminds me of poe (the raven) in a way.

feels like i;ve felt this though.

kait your words mean so much to me.
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