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i have been told that
my cheeks seem to slender
like the stars.

truth be told i

inhaled until my bones
bloomed through my skin
and i sunk;

licked my kisses chapped
'til they reddened
like the roses;

contracted so i'd esvaniss.


i had once hoped to find
it there, the beauty

but instead i
always found space.
so you see,
there is always
an exp
li
nation
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Given 2011-11-23
de la belle by ~KaitForest ( Suggested by capricordestin and Featured by wreckling )
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
Don't mind me, I'm just commenting on a poem I should have commented on a long time ago.

This is amazing. Fucking amazing. Fuck you for being so perfect, and me for wishing I could write half as well as you.

:heart: :heart: :heart: (Yes, I just gave you three hearts... because one is not enough.)
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013   Writer
!!! you are so wonderful. this poem is so old i swear sometimes i forget it exists. thank you so much, i'm glad you liked it!
:heart::heart::heart: three hearts for you in return bc ily
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013

You're welcome, lovely. And old or not, this poem is pure gorgeousness.

I love you too. :love:

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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wow
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013   Writer
:love:
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Gay-Mountain Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
As if I never read read this. The pace is perfect and the first 7 lines are absolutely incredible and they fit it so well
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013   Writer
thank you so much <3
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Lottie-Girl Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Beautiful.
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012   Writer
oh, why thank you :)
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Lottie-Girl Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Student General Artist
Welcome :D
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