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-- this is appropriation
my sweet synchronicity ,
i have downed your appetite
in a bed of front teeth 

(it is morning in perth
midnight in dublin, and the noon
sun has been lost behind
a dress of mothy curtains)

do i taste of

your forethought 
of love making;

do i reek of

the weeds that 
have infiltrated

the posture of your spine?

-

you bend over
my lap a curve of guilt
and weep all night.

i collect each knob of your body
like a gift. press it to my mouth.
swallow, spit.
when i used to get sad or angry i would write to make myself feel better. now i stare at walls or curl up in bed and i don't want to do that anymore.

also, coffee. which is a drug. which isn't a drug. but it is. and it awakens me and makes me want to write for three hours.
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your stunning work has been featured here untamedunwanted.deviantart.com…! :heart:
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013   Writer
thank you!
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FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
<-- a wee bit speechless.

This is incredible, Kait.
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013   Writer
:blushes: no you
thank you :heart:
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FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Of course, love.
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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013   Writer
Those last two lines are perfect.
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013   Writer
thank you
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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013   Writer
You're welcome.
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DamagedHomewrecker Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this is absolutely amazing. the imagery, the structure, the feelings...i love everything about this.
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013   Writer
:blush: thank you so much!
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