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the  talk 

        of           my 

                            heart
                                          unfurls,

                                                        wisps
    
                                                       of        smoke
    
                                                tangled in my          voice,
    
                                              strangled along your         chest;
    
                                                tonight we spend our seconds
    
                                                    deliquescing our desires
    
                                                        into wicks for flames
    
                                                                         yet to be        lit,
    
                                                       and still i dare seek the             fumes   
    
                                                 pressed in your stare- gasoline for my       lips
    
                                                  to infuriate the stagnant caliber that is      your
 
                                                      wish; dare for your fingers to ignite          me
    
                                                              the ache in your moans to          align me
    
                                                                         a constellation in your  mattress;
    
                                                                               i wait for you to covet 

                                                                                             your wants,
   
                                                                                                      but    you 

                                                                                               and  i       flicker out;
   
                                                                                             a candle   in the night

                                                                                                  waiting    to be
      
                                                                                                             re-
                                                                                                             lit
i don't usually like when people write these but it was fun
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Daily Deviation

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fumes by *KaitForest powerfully enforces the words through the image, rather than the image through the words. ( Suggested by AzizrianDaoXrak and Featured by Nichrysalis )
:iconunspecifiedunknown:
UnspecifiedUnknown Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013   Writer
congrats on this love :heart:
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:iconkaitforest:
KaitForest Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013   Writer
thank you <3
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:icontravelgirlxx:
travelgirlxx Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
You've been featured: [link]

Keep up the fabulous work!!
:heart:


(and P.S. - I normally am not one for typography, but this rocks!!)
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:iconkaitforest:
KaitForest Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013   Writer
thank you, lovely!
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:icontravelgirlxx:
travelgirlxx Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
:heart:
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:icon1000themes:
1000Themes Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
The spaces made me really appreciate this poem

I.

Was. Reading.


With.

A


Stam . mer

:XD:
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:iconkaitforest:
KaitForest Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013   Writer
:)
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:iconladyofgaerdon:
LadyofGaerdon Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Professional Writer
This is amazing! Excellent job and congrats on the DD!
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:iconkaitforest:
KaitForest Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012   Writer
thanks love! <3
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:iconateendra:
Ateendra Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
Fudge, this is so awesome. :D
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