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they say honey
to soften the wound, 
but i let the wool
wet with ethanol
gnaw
until i am
weeping,

again, and again,
and again
jk
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creightonwrites Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015  Professional Artist
Exceptional.
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015   Writer
:heart:
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Livelovemaria Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love your work. This one almost made me cry
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015   Writer
i did good then? :hug:
(thank you)
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:iconlivelovemaria:
Livelovemaria Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes definitely
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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014   Writer
Lovely. :heart:
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:iconkaitforest:
KaitForest Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014   Writer
:blushes: thank you :3
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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014   Writer
You're welcome. :)
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successwithhonor Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Student Writer
god, you have that voice that just echoes in your head

(like if you've been to a mausoleum or memorial monument and had a conversation with [yourself])

you can hear the souls speak

& i miss it/them/you :rose:
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:iconkaitforest:
KaitForest Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014   Writer
that's a lovely image. thank you.

it/they/i miss you too :heart:
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ArchaisBeo Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I dig it
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:iconkaitforest:
KaitForest Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014   Writer
:meow:
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ghostinafog Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014
this is powerful.
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:iconkaitforest:
KaitForest Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014   Writer
oh wow thanks
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KissTheSunrise Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014
wool or steel wool ??

i once raised a steel wool sheep for 4-H.  He didn't win, it
rained a few days before judging and he rusted fast. :/

again(..), and ..,
and ..

(;
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014   Writer
:O
:lol:
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KissTheSunrise Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014
well...  it was meant to be funny. :roll:
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014   Writer
:lol: :huggle:
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KissTheSunrise Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014
:aww:  Aww... that's cute, it made me happy.
Thanks lovely one. :D :heart:
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