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tell me, boy
who is your god.

do not say it
is the limbs

that spread you
between knowing
and comfort;

do not tell me it is
hands wrapping a head
board, nor a mouth
tugging your name
for salvation.

i want to know who it is
that makes you lucent,
bent beneath the dark,
weeping,

because there is no divinity
like the one that makes
you bleed
a poem i wrote a while ago, resent to me the other day by =KissTheSunrise
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:iconwinterkate:
winterkate Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Student Writer
WHY ARE YOU SO GOOD.

I missed your work when I was gone. 
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014   Writer
:love: thank you!
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FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is so wonderful, Kait. And I'm mighty glad Ms. Megan resent this to ya so we can all enjoy it.
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013   Writer
thank you so much :heart: yes i'm very glad she did.
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FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Of course, love. :heart:
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glossolalias Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013
in the last strophe, did you mean the one who makes you bleed or was that intentional? either way, this poem is almost chilling--and remarkably true.
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013   Writer
i'm afraid to ask what the difference is :B 
would it make a difference if it were who (verses that)?
thank you :3

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flummo Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Student Writer
this is a stunner
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013   Writer
thank you :meow:
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JohnTanner Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Professional General Artist
Divinity makes you bleed? Hah?
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