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                          i         am
                                       
                                        so
                                           
                                                    terrified       
                                                               
                                                         to
                                                                let
                                           

                                                                                you   
                                                                                       

       
                                                                                                                                        go,

for it to be like it was
when you and i had
not met

for the emptyness
                to         be

the                                 only                                         ocean                                             left


to                                                                                                                                submerge
i really did write this in my notebook just as you see it. i am not sure why
i wanted to drift
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:iconhippiehebe:
HippieHebe Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lovely
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:iconkaitforest:
KaitForest Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013   Writer
thank you:)
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:iconyour-methamphetamine:
your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student Writer
I'm not a fan of visual poetry, but you've somehow managed to make me fall in love with this. So simple, so beautiful.


emptiness*, perhaps? :slamhead:
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:iconkaitforest:
KaitForest Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013   Writer
i am glad!

jesus, how did i not catch that! fank you, lovely <3
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:icondigital-subconscious:
Digital-Subconscious Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Photographer
I really enjoyed this, loved the formatting!
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:iconkaitforest:
KaitForest Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013   Writer
thank you!
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:iconrosescarlet:
RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Writer
I really love this.
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:iconkaitforest:
KaitForest Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013   Writer
i'm glad:3
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:iconrosescarlet:
RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Writer
^^
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:iconohsparrowsong:
ohsparrowsong Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
:heart:
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