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hang me from the moon,
i want to be beautiful

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thomarieforever666 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014
de nada :) (Smile)
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wxnderlust Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing wow
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014   Writer
thank you<3
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XBunnybunz Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
This was fantastic. It only holds 10 words, but it hold so many emotions. 
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013   Writer
:heart: thank you
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Vilhelm-Johansson Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, simply...fantastic! :wow:
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013   Writer
thank you!
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Nullibicity Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is one of the best examples I think I've come across for the saying "it says so much with so little." What an impact amplified from the fact there are so few words! The title added nicely and I really loved the content.
Overall, I suppose there's not too much to say (though I wish there was!): Poems of this kind really leave one less with words and more with emotion.
Bravo :rose:
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013   Writer
thank you so much, love!
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Nullibicity Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Of course. :hug:
It was truly my pleasure! :heart:
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ssensory Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013   Writer
Your lovely poem has been featured here.
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013   Writer
<3 thank you
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ssensory Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013   Writer
you're most welcome!
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Fisk-Hollow Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know that these words capture a specific emotion and feeling. I can already hear them echoing in my head speaking to moments where I couldn't find the right words. Simply beautiful and haunting.
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KaitForest Featured By Owner May 3, 2013   Writer
thank you so much <3
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Liedy Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
It's interesting because everybody knows exactly what you say here, and they do because you have cultivated that essential knowledge into a simple aesthetic, which in turn works so well because it is that simple. Simple, simple simple! Most poems regarding this matter attempt to go into detail about the personal relation towards that of wanting to "hang in beauty" but consequently will lose this essence, and ironically so because they go the extra mile to get there. By keeping but the essential element, everybody will intuitively upon reading it articulate that which they relate to it for themselves, and so one could even say that there is no need to keep it more complicated than this, which in turn would allow one to say that you did excellently. This is all digression of course, but I just really liked it, perhaps because it contrasts so well to the tedious; very tedious, tendency to get all whiny and dull about one of the most frequently recurring themes in poetry. In other words, fresh breath of air (high five). Of course capturing an essential element is a skill in itself, but to do it shortly and in such beauty, deserves credit. All praise well deserved!
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013   Writer
i think i live for comments like these. wow. i am so glad you enjoyed this, despite its length. it is always reassuring to find those who understand my exact intentions in a piece- not only does it make me feel good about myself, but about the reader, as well (communication without direct contact). it is what i had in mind. and i was afraid no one had gotten my meaning, i was afraid i wasn't explaining myself, so to hear that you got it perfectly makes me feel so confident in this piece especially. thank you. this comment has made my day. <3
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Liedy Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
Idk, personally I prefer it when people don't explain themselves, because one of the small wonders with art is that it hits that which cannot be explained, and any explanation then tend to, you know, consume the art in it? Anyway, glad to help.
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DogmaticKerr Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Tragically understandable :heart:
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012   Writer
<3
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DogmaticKerr Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:heart: <3
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hazeltown Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you are the moon,
watching the world orbit for you
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012   Writer
<33333
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my-soul-is-mine Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
This feels like it could be a caption on a book cover. Like you know those little quotes on some of them? It has that type of feeling to it. I mean that in a good way, of course. I like this a lot. I wish I could say as much in so few words.
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012   Writer
do you mean like an epigraph? that is probably the greatest compliment i could ever get on such a short piece. thank you! :heart:
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my-soul-is-mine Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
No problem :)
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Shannon-Sweeney Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely<3
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012   Writer
thank you!
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Mingamia Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This feel. :iconiknowthatfeelbroplz:
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012   Writer
<3
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touristEYES Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you don't need the moon to be beautiful, words are working quite nicely.

i'm corny sometimes, sometimes it's fun to be.
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012   Writer
heh <3
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xlntwtch Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012   Writer
A great little piece. :iconcongratssignplz: on the DLD!
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012   Writer
thank you!
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xlntwtch Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012   Writer
You're welcome!
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KissTheSunrise Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
Congratulations on the DLD Kait, it's well deserved. (:
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012   Writer
thank you!
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012   Writer
:love:
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starell Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
fabulous couplet, really like it a lot!
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012   Writer
thank you!
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starell Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
welcome :)
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thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012   Writer
This is delectable.
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012   Writer
thank you, and thank you for suggesting it! you are absolutely wonderful. <3
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thetaoofchaos Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012   Writer
:heart:
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