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heaven for books,
and mulatto boys that
break my heart; thank 
god for vodka and

thank god for urges 
that slither into deep throats
past better judgement and 
thank god for his hands
that he loved
me with
inspired by diddlyhohum's journal, what are you thankful for?

originally posted on my other account several months ago, it has been taken down and now posted here.
<3
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014   General Artist
:heart:
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014   Writer
:love:
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014
The last one hit me where it counts. :heart:
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014   Writer
<3 i hope that's a good thing
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
By "where it counts" I meant my heart (sorry if that sounded wrong :blush:), and it's a very good thing. :nod:
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014   Writer
lol it didn't sound wrong! i'm glad.
this poem came from my heart. plucked right out of it. forcefully. it hurt. haha.
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
Phew, good. I was worried about that. :XD:

I could tell. It was such a painful poem to read -- like picking up pieces of a ripped apart heart and holding them, unable to do anything but accept them as they were -- but I'm so glad I did. :heart:  
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diddlyhohum Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
beautiful :heart:
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KaitForest Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014   Writer
:blushes:
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KimchiMuse Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student Writer
This is passionate and earthy and raw.  I love it.  You have an extra "and" on the transition from the first stanza to the second.
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